One Hot Chick
It’s normal in life so I’m told
To journey from young into old
Where hot flashes reign
With ointments for pain …
Still sweet, sexy, saucy – with soul!
♥ ♥ ♥
The above is my submission for the Writing 201: Poetry – see guidelines below.
Your prompt: journey | Today’s form: limerick | Today’s device: alliteration
NB: Found it very hard to include all of the required elements but in the end, was pleased with the result 😀
Gale Weithers 
G’day again Galeweithers,
That is so clever, I do so love a good giggle and you have certainly given me that, thank you
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Laughter is good for the soul; I’m still working on the hot flashes though … will keep you posted 🙂
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Your poem has an surprise right out the gate. Hot Chicks makes you think one way but the surprise is it isn’t what your first thought is. You did a great job. Blessings.
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Thanks a lot for stopping by and glad you liked my fun Limerick (written with much tongue-in-cheek) 😀
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You are welcome 😊
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Beautiful.
It tells of life’span journey
The older one get, the more the pain;physical, emotional etc and as you rightly put it, there is always ‘ointment for the pain’
I love the flow.
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Glad you liked it and yes, I actually do have lots of ointment (as I labor through the flashes – lol). Thanks for visiting and commenting.
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YES!!! So witty and fun.
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And ‘hot’! LOL.
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Loved the brightness of mood in this, nicely done 🙂
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Thanks much! Glad you liked it 🙂
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