Old but definitely not cold :)

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One Hot Chick

It’s normal in life so I’m told

To journey from young into old

Where hot flashes reign

With ointments for pain …

Still sweet, sexy, saucy – with soul!

♥   ♥   ♥

The above is my submission for the Writing 201: Poetry – see  guidelines below.

Your prompt: journey | Today’s form: limerick | Today’s device: alliteration

NB: Found it very hard to include all of the required elements but in the end, was pleased with the result 😀

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Barbadian mother and lover of laughter; story teller and best-selling author; happy to follow God's lead and to live my mantra: "you've gotta be a rainbow in the lives of others when it rains."

11 thoughts on “Old but definitely not cold :)”

  1. Beautiful.
    It tells of life’span journey
    The older one get, the more the pain;physical, emotional etc and as you rightly put it, there is always ‘ointment for the pain’
    I love the flow.

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